One morning the zookeeper was awakened by a phone call from the zoo.  He had to make a booby-trap since there was a monster on the loose.  Believe it or not, the monster and the zookeeper got there at the same time.  Although, he was watching both sides of the zoo, the monster used his power laser.  He used it to break the lock. However, the laser went so far it hit one of the magical animals. The zookeeper used his health regeneration capability on the injured animal. The monster got closer to the trap. BOOM! He fell. Promptly, the animals will be safe and sound.
 


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Ms. Sargent (100 WC Team)
06/16/2013 3:04pm

Hi Dyanara,
I liked the way you developed your story, including the mission and how it gets carried out. Your pictures added to the overall piece in a nice way. Good job.

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Fay (Team 100WC)
06/18/2013 5:15am

Hi Dayanara,
Thanks for this 100wc entry. I always like stories with happy endings! Your drawings really brought your story to life. Good work!

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Elizabeth
06/19/2013 6:57am

Wow this story is really cool your deserve to be in the top 3.
Plus I love monsters and magic.

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Raven
06/19/2013 6:57am

wow that was so good a monster in a zoo was an amazing idea! i think a trap for the monster was genius i really liked it!

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andrew
06/19/2013 7:06am

Thank you for leating me read your story. I would like to make a few comments on the story of yours.
I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY BECAUSE it's EXCITING IT WAS AMAZING. from andrew

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John from Whitley Bay
06/19/2013 7:08am

Its a little wierd but that makes it better well done.

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Adam
06/19/2013 7:10am

Nice 100wc enrty I like storys that have happy ending. All that I have to say!

adam, Whitley Bay, England

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