Do you know what are audits? Well audits is
when a person is observing your blog, but you take notes of their reactions.
Also after the person is done reading or skimming your blog, you ask questions.
But the questions below are for me to answer so keep reading.

 1. How many posts did you write (different
post on weebly and kidblog)?

 On my kidblog I have
18 post. On my weebly I have 10 post.

 2. How many were school based (assigned by
Mrs. Vilas )

 I did 5 post
Mrs.Vilas told me to do and I did 13 post by my self some are the blogging
challenges but the rest aren’t maditory.

 3. How many comments did you receive from
classmates, teachers or overseas students?

 I have had 24
comments on my kidblog, from clasmates, teachers, and oversea
students.

 4. Which post received the most comments?
Why do you think that happened?

 The post that got
the most comments is ” My Favorite Things”. I got 5 comments on my post. I think
I got a lot of comments because i wrote of something interesting, people would
want to see if they have the same things as me. So that is probably why I got 5
comments on my post.

 5. Which post did you enjoy writing the most
and why?

 The post that I
liked writing about was ” Everyone Helping Nature”. I liked it because I feel
like that post will atleast make a change, for people to help nature. I think it
was fun.

 6. Did you change blog themes at all and why
(on kidblog)?

 Yes I actually did
change my backround a few times. I changed it because, then people can visit my
blog a lot. So then I will have a lot of comments, and they will keep
visiting!

 7. How many widgets do you have on weebly?
Do you think this is too many or not enough?

 I have 4 widgets. I
think that it is just enough, because if you have a lot of widgets you will have
to keep on scrolling down. So if you don’t have a lot you don’t need to do
that.

 8. How many overseas students do you have on
your blogroll on weebly?

 I have 9 overseas
students. I hope you liked my post! Comment below so I know what you
think!

 Do you have more
overseas students or less?

 My student ( Kiara) audit:


 What were your first impressions of this
blog?

 Kiara’s first impressions was that I work
hard on my blog. Kiara was happy and excited about “Recycling” the post. She
says that it will probably improve over the summer.

 What captured your attention?

 What captured her attention was that we
almost had the same peopl. Kiara said I had a lot of personality in my writing.
She said it is great, the blog is beautiful.

 What distracted you on the blog?

 Kiara said was that I had no catergories (
it was fine because she didn’t either). Also that I wasn’t commenting back to my
visitors. But then she noticed on some I did.

 What suggestions can you give me to improve
my blog?

 One suggestion she said was to add more
vokis. It would be more interesting on my blog post, so people can hear my voice
on my blog post.

 Weebly

 What were your first impressions of this
blog?

When she was reading my “All ABout Me” page,
she was happy that she learned more about me, she said.

 What captured your attention?

 What captured her attention was that she
liked my dog. She was impressed that I made my virtual pet. She was impressed
that she saw her name.

 What distracted you on my blog?

 What distracted her was that one of my post
was smushed all together into a big paragraph.

 What suggestions can you give me to improve
my blog?

 She suggested that it would be done,first on
weebly. Because it is easier and nicer.


 Parent ( Father)Kidblog audit


 What were your first impressions of this
blog?

His first impression was that he was
surprised by my posts. That also my writing is great.

 What captured your attention?

 My dad says taht he likes the pictures I
chose. He says the fine writing.

 What distracted you on my blog?

 Something that distracted him was that there
was no coloring in the font. It would be cuter and better.

 What suggestions can you give me to improve
blog?

 Well if you put coloring or different size,
people would want to read more. The people would want t o read more.

weebly

 What were your first impressions of this
blog?

 His first impression was that it was well
thought out and it is well- detailed writing.

 What captured your attention?

 His answer was how I stated my opinion about
every characteristic.

 What distracted you on the blog?

 I didn’t reread for proper grammer. There
are some grammer mistakes.

 What suggestions can you give me to improve
my blog?

 To reread the blog often. Also try to use
higher vocabulary.


 Teacher ( Mrs. Santiago’s) kidblog
audit

 What were your first impression of this
blog?

 Mrs. Santiago was impressed of my writing,
that also I have a blog and I get to see my peers write. She was impressed by my
sidebar.

 What captured your attention?

 She was excited that it has pictures with
specific details. Also that I put a post about stuff less than a
dollar.

 What distracted you on the blog?

 One thing was I put “there delicious”
instead of ” They are” or “they’re”. But nothing else.

 What suggestions can you give me to improve
my blog?

 She said if I put 3 pictures for 3 of them
then put pictures for the rest of all of them. Also to look at other
resources.

 


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